spears through my ears
heavy metal
heavy metal
spikes
wear them when i feel too nice
grungey
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90s brit rock
right along with the likes of plaid, mohawks and safety pins
my spikes
tear you open don't they
piercing my ears
and you
heavy metal
spears of joy, pain and punk
oh sweet punk
they cut like vodka
rip like the dead
piercing my ears and your heart
like the shots of life
you're just sitting alone
and drunk
i don't usually write in this style but i wanted to step outside my comfort zone a little tell me what you think. while writing im constantly sounding like a hopeless unrealistic teenager, but lets face it i am and so are many poets deep down; anyways i'd love some feedback.
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